Rejection at the bank

Luis and Gustavo two brothers walk in to a bank asking for a loan to help out their ill mother, they dont get it

This piece is in Film Format so read with your eyes...

i mean its a visual thing

INT. Bank Day

Luis and Gustavo are sitting in front of a desk; there is a calm air around them while the Loan Supervisor behind the desk looks at their case.

GUSTAVO

So is everything in order?

The man checks the papers one last time and stands up

Loan Supervisor

Let me show this to my

Supervisor

The man get up and goes enters a back door

Loan Supervisor

Hey Carlos check this out

The door flaps close

GUSTAVO

I think its going well

The door flaps open

On the other side there are two men in suit laughing out loud

Loan Supervisor

Hey Alice check this out at this

The door flaps close

GUSTAVO

I really hope we get it this time

The door flaps open

This time there are two men plus a woman laughing really loud

ALICE

O my god are you serious?

The door flaps close

GUSTAVO

I mean this is the fifth one we been

Too this week

More and more suits walk in to the door to join the party, their laughter is heard in the whole back

Luis gets up and motions Gustavo to follow suit, Gustavo gets up with a concern look on his face

GUSTAVO

We should wait for him

They are interrupted by the laughter of a teller and his client, both of them are pointing at them

LUIS

Lets just go

We wont get the loan

GUSTAVO

How do you know that?

LUIS

Really? are you ...

lets just go

GUSTAVO

I mean there is still a chance

Right?

A woman with a small child pass by both of the brothers

Child

Nop

My Dream about you

By Gonzalo

The other day I hade a dream
A beautiful dream
It was about you
And it was about me

We were standing together
Facing at each other
You hade a smile
A smile that light up the room

It happen so fast
It happen so quick
In the blink of an eye
You gave me a kiss

On that single moment
Time stopped and the universe imploded
For that single moment every thing was perfect
And nothing could go wrong

But after all it was just a moment
After a second in bliss
Reality sinks in
I get up and the moment is gone

Writing by gonzalo

I just wanted a space were I could post my thoughts, I do have a binder at home but that is dated.
I hope this space will grow and more people will join and in time post any material they want to be read, I want to think about this place as a cyber literally buffet, come in and take a plate